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V. C. Ackerman's avatar

Very well done! I think this may be one of my favourite poems that you’ve made.

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Owen Wiseman's avatar

Thanks so much!

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Lorie Long's avatar

A great poem. I had to read it twice because the first time I was so taken with the rhyme, I missed so on the content.

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Owen Wiseman's avatar

A second read is a rave review in my book. :)

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Diana Boyle's avatar

WHAT A POWERFUL POEM. Great imagery, and many messages woven through - makes you think.

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Owen Wiseman's avatar

Thank you!

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